Please Review My IELTS Writing Task 1.

Task 1: The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts compare the percentage of six different types of British students who could speak French, German, Spanish, two other languages, another languages and just only English in a university in England in 2000 and 2010.

Overall, Spanish was the second language that had the highest percentage of British students in both 2000 and 2010. While the percentage of British students who were able to speak German remained unchanged, that of other kinds changed.

In detail, while the proportion of British students who were able to speak Spanish increased by 5% to 35% in 2010, there was a decrease by 5% to 10% in French language. About 15% and 10% British students could speak another language and two other languages in 2000 respectively, there was a rise by 5% in 2010 in both groups. While the proportion of British students who were likely to speak German was unchanged at 10%, there was a decrease in only speaking English students from 15% to 10%.